JVDragon's All Out Attack

A new character I made up today, I haven't got a name for her right now but she is part main group I have for a story. There's a boat on the right side because that is the boat that the main characters use and she modified it so it can fly in the air. The time or place takes place in the past or another planet, haven't decided yet.
I don't like how it came out, I made a lot of mistakes that I have to erase on the computer but it's decent enough. Created it because I have been playing Persona 3 alot, it is a very addicting game. I'm not going into detail about them but there are suppose to four of them but I haven't gotten an idea of what he should look like.